Term 2 writing sample

I am learning to:

1. Make my writing interesting by using describing words

2. Attempt to use capital letters and full-stops by myself

Success criteria:

I will know I can successfully do this when my writing shows

1. One or more Adjectives that match my picture

2.

• A capital letter at the start of my story and at the beginning of each new sentence.
•  A full-stop at the end of each of my ideas and at the end of my story.

Next steps:
1. Re-read my writing to make sure that all the words I need are there and take out any that I don't need.
2. Put a capital letter after each full-stop in my story.

Student comment:
I am good at putting capital letters at the start.
I could work on finding words in the room to help with my writing.